I wrote another love poem. Do you like it?

I have another poem for my true love:



If I could have just one wish,

I would wish to wake up everyday

to the sound of your breath on my neck,

the warmth of your lips on my cheek,

the touch of your fingers on my skin,

and the feel of your heart beating with mine...

Knowing that I could never find that feeling

with anyone other than you,

My sweet pea...

Natalie.
I wrote another love poem. Do you like it?
that's so sweet.

i would remove the word 'and' from the sixth line (it detracts from the repetition and rhythm), but other than that it's excellent.
Reply:That is so sweet, thoughtful, and such a beautiful thing to say to someone. Good Luck.
Reply:nice...
Reply:aawwee its very sweet...
Reply:its sweet ^_^
Reply:*sniffle sniffle that is so sad BUT SWEET
Reply:You got it bad hon
Reply:Yep that's sweet.
Reply:send us more poems
Reply:that is so beautiful keep up the work
Reply:awwwwww this is so weird, but so so sweet?





hopefully your not the millionth account of Action C.